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Third Rate Romance
Oct. 7th, 2007 10:08 pm( Short Story, Original Fiction: Third Rate Romance )
So two things I'm especially looking for, one of which do you think the diner needs to be described more, and two, which ending do you like best.
Any other feedback, of course, is very appreciated. :))
So two things I'm especially looking for, one of which do you think the diner needs to be described more, and two, which ending do you like best.
Any other feedback, of course, is very appreciated. :))
